I wrote a song.....

This is just a song I wrote and my friend is singing in it. I just want opinions on how it sounds if anyone wants to be helpful. This is not my effort to get my music out there, I honestly just want feedback at this point. Thanks!

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Dude that sounds amazing

Great work! Better than what I can do at the moment!

aww why thank you